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Re: Intrigue
Hey. This was a good read. I found the secret message clever and entertaining. The poem itself flowed well until certain points (which have already been pointed out.) Try to ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Cinderella?
Hi. I have just one thing to say about your poem-Wow! It was beautifully written and gives a deliciously dark twist on the much-loved, if a little worn out, classic. ...
Mar 17, 2010 -
Re: Wonders
hi. I am now going to try and write you a review, but, don't worry, it's only due to the ratios. Your poem was...interesting! It was good, no doubt, but ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Christmas Day 1914
I loved your poem! :) It was very interesting. I knew what the subject was originally, so it made me smile. I particulary liked your reference to 'Toms' and 'Jerry'. ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: And so they fade...
Hi. I really love your poem :) It was a little confusing at the start but, in the end, it was clear. I think you should change the last line ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: The adventures of the geek.
Hi. I liked your poem. It rings true to the life of a 'geek' and I love the title! It's inticing! Now I'm in a bit of a catch 22 ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: I Hurt To Love You (revised)
Hi. Your poem was beautiful! It reminds me exactly how I felt when me and my boyfriend were going through a rough patch. Was it based on you? You need ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Just Leave.
Hi. I thought your poem was good! It reminded me of how I feel during Maths (which is 6th period today! :-() and Not a graze on her steely frame ...
Nov 18, 2009 -
Re: Calling All Heroes
Hi. Your poem had really strong imagery. It was a powerful poem with strong emotions. I perseved the boy as a teenager who is in a downward spiral and can't ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Sunday Solitude
Hi. I liked your poem. I think that your poem isn't about a loved one as it first seemed, more of a object...or himself? That the 'prize' is on his ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Dead Among the Monkey Bars
Hi. Your poem was good, I enjoyed it. Although, me and my nan saw it as two different things. Me, a child now grown up and looking back on his ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Dried Apricots
Hi. I loved your poem. It sounded like an odd-ball from the title but, when I read it, it was good! It had me rembering stuff that brought back memories...even ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: The Accidental Run-In
Hi. I'm now going to write you quite a long review as the ratio has just gone up...damn, that's annoying! Your story was good. Quite a lot of sentences that ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Pain Forever Gone
Hi. I liked your poem.You can tell it is true. Sorry it is, whatever happened. I got a little confused on why she left him, who he was and what ...
Nov 1, 2009 -
Re: a rose for the abused..
Hi. I loved your poem. It was vivid and clear. It was also subtle yet at the same time, hard hitting. The 2 by 4 doesn't seem to be the ...
Nov 1, 2009
